Keen Avarice Loupine

[Keen Avarice Loupine]

Keen Avarice Loupine
The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort, but where he stands at times of challenge and controversy.~Martin Luther King Jr.

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THE RP-er;;

Real Name:
StarlingsHour (You can call me Starling or Star

Age:
17

Gender:
Female

Experience:
I've been rping for years. I'm not sure how many though. I've been able to post up to 2200, but I prefer not to(that's way too much work lol) I had just been taking some time off and am getting back into it.


Do you play any other characters on the site?:
Nope

GENERAL;;

Play-By: Stephanie Gourlant (I dislike play-bys but I figure she comes pretty close. There is a picture in my Avatar that I like better but I do not know that model's name)

Name:
Keen Avarice Loupine

Nicknames:
None

Hometown:
Bloomsburg, PA

Birthday:
June 19th, 1944 (Because of the age difference. She has aged approximately 5 lycanthrope years)

Age:
In human years 66. But she is technically only 27, since she was changed at 16 and has aged 5 lycanthrope years since.

Gender:
Female

Sexuality:
Straight

Shifter or Human:
Shifter

Animal:
Grey Wolf

HUMAN PHYSICAL;;

Short Description:
Keen has brown hair that falls to her mid back, green eyes, and very sharp features.

Full Description:
Keen is a very good looking female, but no one would call her dainty. She has plenty of muscle and her features are very sharp. Her cheek bones, chin, and jaw line is very distinguish. Her bright green eyes could capture anyone. She always has an air of importance on her and her stance is that of a fighter. She stands wide with her shoulders back and chin up. Her figure is that of an hourglass. Her hands are on the small side, but they are nimble.

Size:
5' 7"
156lbs (Approximately, she likes her food so it fluctuates. Granted she is in excellent condition so her body does not change too much with a few extra pounds lost or gained.)

Disabilities:
None

Picture;;

See Avatar

ANIMAL PHYSICAL;;

Short Description:
She is a stocky wolf, brown in color with golden eyes.

Full Description:
Keen has bright gold eyes as a wolf and a coat that is a mixture of browns. She is stocky at 44" at the shoulder and 62" in length. Her weight is 207lbs. She is a bit larger than is average for a grey wolf because of her muscle mass. One would never call her a dainty female wolf, but she does look feminine in wolf form. Keen always stands as a leader with her head held high and her tail up as a flag. She is highly athletic and in great physical condition.

Size:
44" at the shoulder
62" long
207 lbs

Picture;;
See my Signature

MENTAL;;

Personality:
Keen is highly intelligent, but she also has a ton of common sense. She often puts others before herself though most times they won't realize it because she is distant and keeps her emotions under lock and key. It is hard for her to let herself grow close to anyone because she doesn't wish to hurt them. Her views are mostly utilitarian, where the result is worth more than the means. She is the type of person that gets things done in the most efficient way possible, and she gets them done the right way the first time.

Likes:
Intelligence
Chocolate
Puzzles
Strategizing
Practicing self defence(martial arts, hand to hand, guns, swords, etc..)
Horseback riding

Dislikes:
Stupidity and lack of common sense
Drama
"Cat Fights"
Coffee

Hobbies:
Horseback riding
Practicing Self Defense and Weaponry
Puzzles
Reading

Power Level:
Omega, Beta, Alpha

Powers:
Regeneration
Improved Strength, Senses, and Resilience
Shifting

Abilities:
Self Defense
Strategizing


Inabilities:
Dealing with Stupidity
Following orders from someone she completely disagrees with
She has trouble showing she cares

Fears:
Being unable to take care of himself
Being Disabled

Quirks:
unhygienic people
lack of common sense
She will sneeze when she steps into sunlight

PAST;;

History:
Keen grew up in Bloomsburg PA. Her father was in the Marines and whens he was 16 they moved to Germany because her father got deployed to a base out there. One day a Lycanthrope was caught and held at the base. Keen being curious for more information wanted to go and see him, but her father said no. So she snuck out at night to go and see the lycanthrope. He had black hair and blue eyes and was undeniably attractive. As the nights went by Keen learned a lot about the Lycanthropes from Ethan and she fell for him. One night he told her that he had been an alpha in his territory and he missed his pack terribly. He explained to her about the different abilities of an alpha as well. Keen finally came to trust him and so since she had the master key code to all the locks(she had found it on her father's desk one day) she decided she would actually talk to him in person instead of through the glass barrier that was in place. She slipped in earlier than normal. Ethan was still asleep at the time. Gently she touched his face and his eyes flew open. Unfortunately he had neglected to tell her about an alpha's sex drive, and considering he had been isolated for about a month now he had some needs. His lips met hers and her eyes went wide, soon though she was kissing him back with just much passion. Before that night Keen had been a virgin. Ethan took her once, twice, three times before she could manage to slow him down. Of course she was infected when she was broken and the pain of the change was more than usual because of her already sore body. That night she broke them both out because she understood that she would need someone to teach her about her changing body. He took her to his pack...where she found out about his wife and children. She ran away, back to the states, and that is how she ended up in Phoenix Arizona.

Bloodlines;
Mother: Amelia Loupine, Army Wife, Currently 92 years of age due to the age gap
Father: Robert Loupine, Marine Commander, Deceased at 96 due to age gap
Siblings: None
Grandparents: Gregory and Anna Loupine, Franklin and Barbara Schnyder
(you may go on if you like.)

RANDOMNESS;;

Other:
Oh by the way, I'm absolutely terrible at bios. I've been playing Keen for like 5 years now and I still stink at her bio. Please forgive the suckiness lol I swear my posting is better!!

Theme Song:
Umm I may think of one eventually..sorry.

[Majesty]

Hi there, I'm Majesty and will be reviewing your bio today.


Human Physical
Your word count has fallen a bit short. You may want to lengthen this to around 100 words so that it can be accepted.


Mental
Please further which self defense she has. Please also include an explanation of any training she has in your history.

I am unsure as to what her power level is as that wasn't filled in.

While this is not a problem, please know that insubordination (not being able to take orders) will not go well in a social group. She could very well be kicked out of any group she joins if you're not careful with that.


History
Your history is very strange and largely impossible. Not only would a child with no clearance and not in the military not be able to even get near the lycanthrope, the codes to such a container would be classified beyond belief and would not be left in a desk somewhere. Also, Lycanthropes were not even discovered until 2003. Not even the military knew they existed much less had one. On the same note, please be advised that a rape such as that must be passed by a staff member before written.

Other
Please be advised that your avatar and signature should follow site standards. The correct sizes may be found in the rules.

I will be unable to process your other bio until this one is sorted out. I have already briefly looked over it and suggest that you re-read the rules, particularly the ones in number five.